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So ive been tryign to build up my portfolio. Here are a few pages for a short story Ive been slowly developing. more SOON...
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Hope you don't mind a crit...minor, but in Panel 2 the girl looks like she is falling over. I don't get the sense of balance. Now if she was leaning against the wall then you could put her left arm up for support, but then you'd have to change the next panel. I don't think she's too worried about the punk with the gun. If it was your intention to draw her with a weight shift, then the lean of her head should be opposite the angle of her shoulders, since that's all we see...beyond that your work is exemplary.